First pro sale

I am thrilled beyond belief to announce that I’ve sold my posthuman tragic romance, “Meltwater,” to Strange Horizons!

This is my first professional-rate sale, and I couldn’t be happier about it. It’s a story very close to my weird little brain, and Strange Horizons is right up by the top of the list of places I wanted to sell it. For those not in the SFF short fiction world, Strange Horizons is one of the top online short fiction publishers, with many Hugo and other nominations under its belt. I’ve been reading stuff there for ages, and I’m excited to count myself among its contributors!

Best of all, Strange Horizons’ stories are always free online. So you all will be able to read my story as soon as it goes live, probably sometime in late Spring!

January 2016 update

One month of 2016 already down! Goodbye, time. I scarcely new you.

  1. I’ve been spending a bunch of my creative energy working on a historical fantasy live-action roleplaying game set at the 1815 Congress of Vienna, which will run at Intercon P in Massachusetts in two and a half weeks. 38 characters! Swathes of system! Politics, intrigue, secret societies, guest appearances by Edmund Blackadder, even a totally shoehorned reference to Aaron Burr! I’m very excited to see this thing go live. Doubly so now that the work is all done.
  2. My other major timesink this month has been the Weekend Warrior contest on Codex. Every weekend, 51 hours to produce a 750-word story. After 4 stories, I can conclude that I’m not great at flash fiction; but it’s still a great productive experience, since at least 3 of these will be worth expanding into a real story.
  3. I’ve also been touching up the Conquistador Dragons story. It’s in “final read-aloud” stage and should go off to beta readers before the weekend. I’ve spent so long staring at this story, my eyes have lost all objectivity.
  4. This year I’ll be going to my first Worldcon. More excitingly yet, I’ll be a panelist! Probably more for my science and Mars-spouse status than for my writing, but it’ll be a few months before I have the specifics.
  5. Current submission count: 13 live ones; at least one on shortlist.

Finally, this morning I just got some awesome news — but that’s February news, so y’all will have to wait!

Friends of the Merrill contest

Normally I don’t participate in pay-to-enter writing contests, but I decided last month to go in on  the Friends of the Merrill short story contest, where those entry fees support the Friends of the Merrill, “a volunteer organization to support and promote the Merril Collection of Science Fiction, Speculation, and Fantasy, a public access collection consisting of science fiction, fantasy, gaming materials, graphic novels, and other related items. The Collection is named after acclaimed SF author Judith Merril, who’s original donation of material formed its nucleus.”

I’m thrilled to see that my story is one of the twelve finalists! We’re off to an exciting panel of judges1, who should announce the winner and two runners-up at the end of January.

2015 In Review

2015 drew to a close last week, the end of a year stacked with writing. What did I do, and what did I learn?

First, some statistics and numbers:

  1. 76 stories submitted: 63 rejected, 1 accepted, 12 under consideration.
  2. I wrote 7 new stories this year. Of those, 6 are out on submission, while the last is still in second-draft state. I also gave major top-to-bottom overhauls to 6 older stories.
  3. My first story came out!
  4. I sold a second story!
  5. I attended my first convention of any kind in about 10 years, and then I attended my first convention as a guest. Two very different cons: Fourth Street a small writing con, Archon a big all-media con, both with a lot to love!
  6. I participated in 3 Codex writing contests; I won one of them, came in 2nd in another.
  7. Hey wait, this was also the year I joined Codex. That place has been an amazing source of community, feedback, and advice!

Some deeper thoughts and lessons:

  1. I appear to be an “idea writer.” So many times this year I got feedback from editors or critiquers that began, “This is incredibly clever, but…”
  2. I’ve learned that if I’m spending hours agonizing over how to phrase a sentence, 75% odds the solution is “delete it entirely.”
  3. I got a lot more shortlist spots and personal rejections, but I’m still struggling to make my first pro sale.
  4. I miss so many faraway writing friends! Classmates, mentors, Codexians, and other awesome folks of all kinds. Twitter is nice, but St. Louis is pretty remote from the SFF scene.
  5. I am definitely getting better at this. Four of my last five finished stories (Jewish Sorcery, Scientist Ghost, Posthuman Romance, and Fairy Gentrification) are all massively, qualitatively better than anything else I’ve done. Now I just have to convince someone to buy one of them…

Plans for next year include:

  1. Write the first draft of a novel
  2. Keep producing short stories: at least 6 new ones, and two overhauls
  3. Attend my first WorldCon
  4. Run a 38-person historical fantasy live action roleplaying game
  5. Be more diligent about reviewing/annotating the books I read
  6. Engage in interplanetary warfare to get my wife back from Mars

May the new year be better than the last, for all of us!

Spoilers and the Iceberg of Science

Every now and then, people trot out a scientific study from 2011 called “Story spoilers don’t spoil stories,” which claimed that spoilers generally improved readers’ enjoyment of stories. This study got lots of media attention. Unfortunately, it’s probably wrong.

This is actually the tip of an iceberg. Scientific journals are flooded with studies whose conclusions or results are wrong. There are many reasons why this is true. Some of them are malfeasance, such as data falsification, researcher biases, and “p-hacking”2. But most false results don’t arise from misbehavior. I don’t think the spoilers paper was biased or botched. To understand why this study was probably wrong, we need to get out our sonar and unveil the shape of that iceberg.

As noted since 2005, there’s a hidden structural problem that most researchers ignore: the question of “how likely is your hypothesis?” Because nothing is absolute and certain in our messy world, mainstream statistics are designed to admit a small rate of false positives3. In fields like psychology, findings are worth publishing if your data have a  ≤5% chance without the effect you’re looking for. “If I get heads five times in a row, that’s enough data to conclude that the coin is weighted.” But here’s the rub: what if you had a hundred coins, and only one of them is weighted? “Five heads in a row” occurs 3% of the time, so 3/99 fair coins will pass your threshold, in addition to the 1 weighted coin. You’ve now judged 4 coins to be weighted, and 75% of those judgments are wrong.

Issues in scientific culture compound this. Particularly publication bias, where only the most exciting and novel results get into high-prestige, high-visibility journals. Think about this: “exciting and novel” means “unexpected and unlikely.” As a result, higher-prestige, mass-media-worthy research is especially likely to be wrong.

The Good Spoilers Paper was published in 2011 in the journal Psychological Science, one of the top journals in psychology. However, a recent study of the big-name psychology literature showed that few of its studies held up. They re-ran studies published in the year 2008, so they didn’t replicate the Good Spoilers Paper directly. However, of the social-psychology papers in Psychological Science, only 29% (7/24) of the experiments produced the same conclusions when re-run!4 In other words, a sample of similar research only confirmed the results for 1/3 of studies.

Between publication bias and all the myriad ways to get a false positive, odds are that if a study has counter-intuitive results, and it appeared in a high-profile psychology journal in the last ~decade, it’s probably wrong.5 Remember: “counter-intuitive” means “there is a lot of counter-evidence.”6 If most of the evidence points one way, and a little bit of evidence points the other way, the outlier is probably a statistical fluke.

Moreover, some people have tried to extend the findings of the Good Spoilers Paper, using more complex measures of enjoyment. Lo and behold, they found that unspoiled stories were more fun, suspenseful, moving, and enjoyable.

There may even be specific reasons why spoilers are bad for reasons that the original experiment would’ve missed. But others have explained that well already. My little soapbox is here to tell you not to believe the research that says spoilers increase enjoyment, because science is messy.

Discarding First Ideas

Many sources of writing advice, from Orson Scott Card on down, offer some form of this suggestion: “Don’t stop at your first idea. It’s a cliche. Keep thinking. Your second idea, third idea, fourth — those are where you’ll find the interesting and novel.”

This advice has some practical merit to it. Keep thinking, keep improving; beware of easy answers.

However, there’s nothing unique about your first answer, nor your fourth. Whatever cliches and tired ideas you’ve absorbed from your media consumption, they’re still in your brain after you’ve produced the first six variants of an idea. If your ideas get better through iteration, it’s not because “First Ideas Are Trash,” but because by idea you’ve spent more time thinking about the issue.

Still, I classify this advice under “complete bunkum” for one reason: it’s a straight-up example of the availability heuristic. This cognitive bias occurs because the human brain grabs onto the memorable and striking events, and forgets the brief and irrelevant. You remember the one time you foretold the future, but forget the thousand other intuitions that never came true.

How is the availability heuristic relevant here? When a new idea flits through your head, you’re not going to latch onto it unless it seems better than your old idea. Any new idea you remember is, by definition, better than your old idea.

Go ahead and find a better idea than your first one. But don’t go teaching new writers a truism as if it’s valuable insight.

November 2015 Update

HAHAHA I fooled you, no November 2015 update.

Editing a million stories while simultaneously writing a new thing for a short-story-in-a-week challenge. I am full of space opera and sentient mining equipment.

October 2015 Update

What a busy month! Victories and defeats aplenty.

  1. My first story came out!
  2. I sold my second story! (Within 24 hours of my first story coming out!)
  3. All four of the stories I had out on shortlists in August/September have been rejected. Boo.
  4. Won second place in the 2015 Codex Halloween Contest7 with an awesome new story about scientist ghosts. This was the super-challenging-to-me story I mentioned in my last monthly update. Man, it is hard to write a first-person scene where the character is not really conscious! But evidently I’ve done a solid job so far, and only better with another revision pass.
  5. Twitch-checking-email with stress because my favorite story is out at an anthology that was supposed to get back to authors by November 1. I’m not naming names because I don’t wanna deadline-shame, but hopefully I’ll hear back soon.
  6. Day job is crazy busy. Crazy SCIENCE busy. I spent a week at a conference last month, and now scurrying to write grants and lectures all due in the next week or two. So I’m a bit behind on writing, but hope to pour myself back in later this month; I have a couple of good pieces begging for revisions.

The Wind and the Spark

My first publication, “The Wind and the Spark,” is now for sale as part of Fictionvale Episode 6, alongside a host of other amazing authors and stories!

Fifty years into the Napoleonic Wars, a British scientist investigates automata that act not like machines, but like thinking creatures.”

You can buy the direct from the Fictionvale website, or from Amazon.

If you enjoy this story, wait until you see something I’ve written since 2013. Edited Oct 21: …including more upcoming stories set in the same universe!

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This was one of my earlier-written stories, perhaps my third ever. Inspired by a late-night conversation back in Oregon, where I mentioned some piece of scientific history, and my friend’s jaw hit the floor8. I said, “Oh, that’s not common knowledge, is it?” And this story was born…

For some more thoughts inspired by the odd mix of characters in this story, see my previous post.

September 2015 Update

Since I have so much already going on in writing and blog, only the briefest of monthly updates:

  1. I now have 4 stories on shortlists or similar final hold. 3 pro, 1 semi-pro. None of the ones from August have resolved. Aaaaaaaaa.
  2. Archon was awesome! I got to sit on panels and talk like a real writer! Yay!
  3. Still expecting my Fictionvale story to come out this week. Woo!
  4. Working on a new super-challenging-to-me story for a Codex contest. Ever upwards!

Vowels and exclamation points Iiiiiii!